{"id":4334,"date":"2023-06-30T13:23:47","date_gmt":"2023-06-30T13:23:47","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/debatrix.com\/en\/?p=4334"},"modified":"2023-08-04T13:30:31","modified_gmt":"2023-08-04T13:30:31","slug":"storytelling-improve-your-story-by-replacing-and-then-with-these-two-words","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/debatrix.com\/en\/2023\/06\/30\/storytelling-improve-your-story-by-replacing-and-then-with-these-two-words\/","title":{"rendered":"Storytelling: Improve your story by replacing ‘and then’ with these two words"},"content":{"rendered":"
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Storytelling: Improve your story by replacing \u2018and then\u2019 with these two words <\/h1>
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Looking to craft a compelling story? Avoid the words ‘and then’. These words turn your story into a summary of facts and incidents. Dull and uninspiring! You want the facts and event to interconnect harmoniously. In this persuasion tip, discover which words you can use to accomplish this.\u00a0<\/b><\/p>\n<\/div><\/section><\/p><\/div>

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Untold Entrepreneurial Tales<\/h2>\n

Many years ago, we introduced the concept of ‘JM Untold’ within entrepreneur’s assocation ‘Jong Management’ . This remarkable initiative entailed evenings where two or three members divulged their captivating ‘untold entrepreneurial stories,’ unveiling their triumphs, tribulations, challenges and decisive moments. In essence, these evenings unfolded as a vivid portrayal of their entrepreneurial journey.<\/p>\n

The risk is that such a life story turns into monotonous CV-like summary. Often, one prepares by writing down a succession of accomplishments, but caution must be exercised to avoid recounting them in a mundane chronological manner.<\/p>\n

What does that sound like? Reminiscent of a child delivering a mundane account of their summer va<\/strong>cation \ud83d\ude09<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n